Sunday, March 19, 2017

My further plans

My further plans for this research paper is to stay focused and to ask my mom for the most help possible because she works in the medical field as a nurse so she's familiar with all these food bourne diseases, which is what my research paper is on.  Moreover, it's been pretty hard staying focused on this paper because I've never had to write such a lengthy paper before but luckily were getting plenty of time to complete the drafts on time.  Furthermore, my other plans to complete draft is to look up more stuff from like the FDA and CDC. The hardest thing for me is to get the citations right. Moreover, the places im falling short is getting the words down like I can get them in my head but once it's time to get writimg or typing whatever I'm doing it's like asking a dog to walk on two feet it's impossible but I have become a little smoother. Another, place I've been struggling on was my punctuation yeah yeah i know im a senior and I'm still having problems with my writing I know that's kind of embarrassing but it's a stepping stone and I'm going to just keep a positve attitude and keep it pushing that's what's been getting me so far by not giving up when it becomes hard and difficult and luckily I have two amazing teachers that make extra time for me when I ask for it and I really appreciate that.

3 comments:

  1. I understand what you are saying, the citations page is probably the hardest thing for me also.

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  2. I feel the citation page isn't hard, it's just difficult to look up all these different articles.

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  3. Hey Khalil, I feel like you just need to be motivated to write this paper and know that you can do it, we all have our weaknesses but focus on your strengths as well and acknowledge them. I think its great that you are using your mom as a personal resource and think its a great idea since she is around it most of the time and can inform you on your topic. Maybe you can also ask others at school if they have ever had a foodborne illnesses. You got it, just use all your resources around you!

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