Next Step for Research Paper

My Research paper is about Farm Animal Welfare. This topic is about how the animals being raised for food are being mistreated. I noted that animals share the earth with us and we should treated them with respect even though they are not equal to us and I also added that animals raised for food are not treated as pets. I have also stated in the paper some of the abuse the animals receive and the conditions the animals live in are horrible. I briefly talked about what effects this abuse does to us humans eating them. I also talked about how the dirtiness of the places the animals are raised in affects the air we breathe. I found some answers to “Why animals raised for food are abused?”  In my early research, I found that farmers raising animals for food are abused just for to make money. The more they produce and the more meat they have on their body, more money will be put in the farmer’s pocket. The very thought of this makes us eaters think, “What are we really eating?”

On my next draft of the research paper, I want to add some more examples of how people were affected from eating foods they didn’t know were abused when they were alive. I also want to add how different animals are affected when they are abused, because in my first draft I only talked about how chickens were treated. I should also find out why farmers do it for the money and not for they well being of eaters.